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Thursday, 4 June 2015

5/06/15 PC Speedwrite Stars and beyond from the beautiful Sun and why?





SPEEDWRITE: INFORMATION REPORT ON STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.




My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading/title:


  • is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)


My opening paragraph/introduction:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way


  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification


  • outlines the main features of the subject


My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:


  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)


  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject


  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)


  • include specific, technical vocabulary


  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)


  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information


My end paragraph/conclusion:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points


  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found












Begin Writing Here:

[Heading/Title of Information Report]
Stars and beyond from the beautiful Sun and why?

[Introduction]
Have you ever been interested in stars? Well if you have just wait and see what I have planned for you it’s going to be the time of your life.


Type of stars
The type of stars are really really cool the fact that I didn’t know was that there, was a lot of dwarf.     The first star the first dwarf star is a red dwarf star the red dwarf  star is a star that looks hot but actually it is really cold the next dwarf star is a yellow dwarf star that are not that hot or cold there just about the same temperature as our sun.  



Life cycle of a star
Stars are born from a cloud of gas called a peninsula  after the  peninsula there is Neplea a Neplea a small star just like a dwarf star but it is the same temperature as us it’s really amazing then the potorstar  comes in a protostar is a  star that is a little bit bigger then a Neplea and a little bit colder.
Then while it changes it goes though a lot and changes to a main sequence star which looks really cool from earth.    




What are stars
A star is a thing that shines in the night sky but it is actually not shining in the night sky it is actually the sun reflecting its light into the stars in the night sky which is really amazing to see in your telescope or binoculars stars a really shine. Sometimes when you see a shooting star it really isn’t a shooting star it is shooting meteor in the night sky.  





[Conclusion]
Now you have some information about the stars in the night sky you might want to write your own information report and if you do look at all my other information reports that I have made and put on my blog and you can also go to this website: http://bit.ly/1h58XRN  

4 comments:

  1. I like how you made good vocab.Where did you get the good vocab from.

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  2. Hey Peter,
    You need to check back and see if you have sentences that make sense. But by the way, you've done good. Even though you have sentences that don't make sense, you still have high level vocabulary. Nice work!!!

    From Lyle

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  3. Hi Peter,
    I like how you told me about what are stars I enjoy reading about it I did't know that its shining from the sun Its brilliant. Brilliant Work Peter!!!!!

    From Jayzel

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  4. Thank you Jayzel I wonder if you have a blog.

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