I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
This is my Diamante poem that I wrote on the 4 of September it was my second time making poems in Flox class. I hope you enjoy reading this poem. Thank you
Hi Peter, I really like your Diamante poem about a boy and a dad. What inspired you to do it on a boy and a dad? I also like the wow words that you put in example beautiful and the verbs that you put in like annoying. From Denzal
Hi Peter,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you made it into a diamond.
Was it hard to make it?
From Rita
Hi Peter,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Diamante poem about a boy and a dad.
What inspired you to do it on a boy and a dad?
I also like the wow words that you put in example beautiful and the verbs that you put in like annoying.
From Denzal